I have been seeing a lot of blackout poetry lately, which has led me to conclude that it is a distinctly subversive form of poetry. Really, a bit of creative manipulation and thievery. You take an original text, put light pencil squares around the words and phrases you select, ultimately blacking out all of the other words. Using this technique, you can either reinforce what the original text is saying, or refute it using its own words, or you can shine a light on a particular thing the text is saying. You can make the text argue for or against itself. Or both. Blackout poems can easily be made to contain both claims and counterclaims. But who cares about writing arguments? We came for the poetry! So please let me encourage you to take your favorite books- the ones you have learned so much from, the ones you are always quoting, the ones that are so full of ideas you seem to notice something new every time you reread them. Photocopy a bunch of pages out of those books, get yourself a Sharpie, and make some poems!
Here is a blackout poem made from Releasing the Imagination: Essays on Education, the Arts, and Social Change by Maxine Greene, copyright 1995 Jossey Bass)
Seeking Contexts
concepts
are currency
for national primacy
What sort of curriculum
has been called the “disuniting of America?”
such questions
on the lower
frequencies
take
for granted
efficiency/feed into claims schools can be manipulated to
comply and serve
From a distance they would never be
able to deal with
the intentionality of everyday life.
Worn-down, crowded urban classrooms
sudden shimmers
clattering corridors like the backstreets of ancient cities.
Puzzled eyes with all their flaws
view every act as a new beginning.
those without a sense of agency
seem alien
How is the teacher to cope with this?
Refusal.